I’m watching Spain vs. Germany World Cup game in Italy (so its broadcast in Italian) with a German man while listening to two Canadian women getting drunk off red wine. I love Hostels. You never know who you’ll meet.
I’m watching Spain vs. Germany World Cup game in Italy (so its broadcast in Italian) with a German man while listening to two Canadian women getting drunk off red wine. I love Hostels. You never know who you’ll meet.
In a word (OK, two), troppo bella.
ReplyDeleteThat second paragraph is a winner in every way.
My only suggestions:
Punctuation
Polishing sentences to make them grammatically sensible.
Punctuation fixer example: (do this...)
I'm sitting here watching the German man, who has a stereotypical German nose. Though there are many distractions in the room, his gaze has not wavered from the TV once.
Polishing sentences: (do this)
I'm watching Spain vs. Germany in the World Cup quarterfinals - but we're in Italy, so it is broadcast in Italian - with a German man and two Canadian women getting drunk from red wine.